Breaking Point: Rise of the Kingpin

Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Expectations



Four days earlier.

Cell block C woke as it always did, the clang of the gates slicing through the last stubborn scraps of night. At 6 o'clock sharp, the corridor lights snapped on, and the guards' heavy boots thundered past the doors. Bruce Chen blinked in the gray twilight, shaking away the two paltry hours of shallow sleep he'd managed after a restless night of shaping and sharpening a scavenged stone.

The entire block stirred, when Bruce walked out of his cell, but the mood was strange. Some men, kept their eyes averted when Bruce moved, skirting his shadow with awkward, silent deference. Others, the remnants of Scar's gang, now scattered across different cells but still thick in the yard, met Bruce's look with cold contempt or acidic whispering, their glances promising that reckoning would come soon enough.

Bruce's own cellmates, the men who now called him "Boss" but still regarded him as more monster than savior, were careful to keep a respectful distance. Their loyalty was cautious, uncertain. Bruce could easily sense the unspoken calculation flickering behind their eyes, a constant weighing of fear, hope, and the memory of Scar's shattered legend.

As they fell in for roll call, the guards, never fond of Bruce, particularly not after recent unrest, deliberately assigned his entire cell to the filthiest chore on the morning rotation: cleaning toilets and scrubbing the shower block.

Bruce didn't flinch. He grabbed a cracked bucket and set to work, keeping his eyes on the tiles but his mind whirring through every face and gesture in the room. It didn't take long before he found the familiar silhouette of Old Zhao, who labored at the other end of the row, wringing out a mop.

Catching no one's attention, Bruce made his way over, his posture casual, but his words low and urgent, words nearly hidden by the squelch of dirty water and the echo of half-hearted complaints.

"Was that enough?" Bruce asked, voice barely above a whisper. "Did I prove myself worthy to you? Am I finally part of your plan?"

Old Zhao was hunched over a drain, hair stringy with sweat, but he didn't pause in his scrubbing. His lips barely moved. "It was a good start, boy," he murmured, his voice gravel-laced and unreadable. "But not good enough. Not yet."

Bruce frowned, his hands tightening on the rim of the bucket. "I survived. Scar is down. His grip is broken. What else is needed?"

Old Zhao glanced sideways, eye glinting with a sly intelligence that always seemed two moves ahead. "You survived the easy test. Taking down one rabid dog? Any lunatic could do that, if they're ready to lose everything. But Scar's crew is still here. They are far more than snarling muscle. They're a pack, organized and hungry. The real trial is whether you can outlast and outthink all of them. Better yet, if you can win them to your side. Then you'll have something nobody's managed in years."

Bruce let the words settle. He watched the steam rise from a cracked floor drain, the soapy water swirling around his boots. Loyalty in this world was a coin quickly spent and easily stolen. Fear could only hold a man's allegiance so long before someone hungrier took your place.

He looked up, weighing Old Zhao's challenge. "You really think that's possible?" Bruce asked, guarded but certain beneath his fatigue.

Old Zhao straightened, hands resting on the mop handle like a scepter. "You are smart. Smarter than most who find themselves stuck in these gutters. You already know what needs to be done," Old Zhao said softly. "You know how to read fear. Now learn to read ambition, and give them something they want more than revenge."

The cleaning crew's voices drifted in nearby, snatches of gossip, curses, plotting. Bruce could feel the air shift, a new pattern forming around him in the undercurrent of the morning routine. He paused, thinking, nodded once.

For the rest of the morning, he worked in silence, watching, planning, letting Old Zhao's words tumble through his mind alongside the rules he'd learned at such cost: Use fear, show strength and promise power. Turn rivals into tools. Never reveal your next move before it's time to strike.

Step by step, as sweat stung his eyes and his raw hands worked the mop, Bruce began laying the foundations of something new. He was already plotting how to make the wolves kneel.


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