Breaking Point: Rise of the Kingpin

Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Cleaning up the scar



Time, when every moment is filled with single-minded purpose, moves with a different logic and speed. Fourteen days blurred past for Bruce Chen behind the barred hatch of solitary. There were no calendars, only the shifting shadows across the cell wall, and the scrape of utensils as meals were slid in through the slot. He spent his time strengthening both body and mind, burning away every weakness.

When the lock finally clanked and the door swung wide on the fifteenth morning, Bruce stepped into the corridor as a man transformed. The guards, usually brusque and dismissive, eyed him differently now, some with open wariness, others with reluctant respect. His body had grown lean and sharp; every movement was deliberate, his gaze darker and deeper than it had ever been. He nodded stiffly at the guards, jaw set, and walked down the corridor, carrying himself with a purpose.

Escorted through the corridors, Bruce Chen reentered the prison's common area, his presence like a cold wind passing through the yard. Whispers edged ahead of him like ripples in a pond. Heads turned, voices dropped to cautious murmurs, his name spoken with awe, fear, and some with a hint of hope from those suffering under Scar's old order.

Mouse, ever observant and quick to sense opportunity, was the first to approach. He practically fell in step beside Bruce, his expression a perfect mix of nervous cheer and genuine relief. "Boss Chen," Mouse said, his voice a low, excited whisper, "We're all glad you're back. Things haven't been the same without you."

Bruce glanced at Mouse, giving nothing away. He knowing all too well the other man's motives, recognized the play for what it was, Mouse was savvy, always trying to read the winning side, and now he was betting on Bruce.

Mouse didn't miss a beat. He turned and gave a quick wave to a dozen of Scar's old followers hanging near the gates, signaling them to step up. Reluctant, they shuffled over in a clump, unity marred by fear and uncertainty. They approached with hunched shoulders, bravado leeched away, clumping together at a cautious distance.

"You lot, come on," Mouse pressed impatiently, loud enough for everyone within earshot to understand who held the leash now. "Let Boss Chen know you're on his side."

A tense, awkward silence, and then the spokesman for the group stepped forward, a burly man whose hands were visibly shaking despite his size. "Boss Chen, we're sorry," he blurted, head dropping low. "We messed up before. Whatever we did, it's in the past. Please… let us go about our business. Don't hold it against us. We'll follow your lead from now on."

Another piped in, his voice thin and strained, "No trouble here, Boss. We all saw what you did, didn't know you had that kind of strength. We were controlled by Scar, we had no choice but to go against you." With a quick, nervous move, he takes out three battered packs of cigarettes. Cigarettes are poor man's gold inside Harbor City Prison, and held them with both hands out as an offering. "Please, take these, Boss. All we have. As a token of… gratitude, for your forgiveness." His face, drawn and hopeful, was echoed on several around him".

Bruce regarded them in silence, letting their words hang, the air tense with expectation. He didn't need to threaten or posture. His lack of reaction was enough, a display of power no one could miss. With a slight nod, he turned away, dismissing their pleas without a word. Acceptance was clear: his authority was now absolute.

Mouse, quick to react, immediately scooped up the cigarettes and announced, "Boss Chen is very generous and forgiving. All of us here know, Scar forced our hands. We did things we don't stand by. Now, we move forward."

The group, visibly relieved, began to thank Bruce, their voices tumbling over each other. The pressure finally off, they backed away in twos and threes, faces blending into smiles as they dispersed, shoulders loosened. No one wanted to linger too long in the new boss's shadow, respectful, but never quite comfortable.

Mouse stuck to Bruce like glue as they crossed the yard. "Boss, where should I keep the cigarettes? Want me to slip them in your bunk, or...?"

Bruce stopped abruptly near a load-bearing pillar, broad shoulders blocking Mouse's path. He cut off the question with a single, sharp look. "Mouse, you were the one who got the witnesses together on my behalf, right? You told them to back up my side of the story?"

Mouse managed an embarrassed, almost proud smile. "It was the least I could do, Boss. Would've been suicide to cross you after what you did to Scar. And besides," he added, lowering his voice, "someone had to have your back in there."

Bruce eyed him carefully, unwilling to grant trust so freely yet acknowledging Mouse's usefulness. Bruce watched him for a moment, as if reading the truth in the lines around Mouse's eyes. He nodded approvingly, just once. "Smart. You know Old Zhao, don't you?" Bruce's voice was low, intent.

Mouse's eyes darted, the grin fading to something more serious. "Sure, well, not that well. Everyone knows him, but nobody really knows what he's about. The old man always keeps something up his sleeve. Some people say he used to control a lot on the outside, and he's still got reach, even in here." He glanced around, then leaned in, "I saw you speaking with him at the showers. Thought maybe someone with real connections could help you."

A rare, nearly imperceptible smile flickered on Bruce's lips. He said, "Keep your eyes open. Mouse. Let me know if there's any plotting, any signs of trouble. You hear anything, you come straight to me."

Mouse's chest inflated, pride obvious. "Yes, Boss Chen. I'll keep my ears open." He hesitated, lowering his voice further. "Just so you know, Big Ear, Scar's old right hand, and two more are still hiding out. They haven't submitted."

Bruce's tone was measured, calm. "You know where they're holed up?"

"They're keeping low for now, probably waiting to see where the wind blows. But I'll find them, and fast."

"Good. Report back. I'll be in the equipment room for now. And keep the cigarettes, Mouse. Consider it payment for your loyalty."

Mouse's face split into a grin. "Thanks, Boss! I won't let you down." With a last glance, Mouse hustled off, weaving through the crowd to gather rumors and whispers, already falling into the role Bruce had shaped for him.

Bruce watched him go, then headed toward the equipment work room, the din of the yard fading behind him. Every sense was awake, each movement measured, as if he were both predator and king in a jungle of shifting alliances. The next stage was underway, and now every piece on the board was his to move.

Meanwhile, across the yard, Old Zhao watched the entire exchange with a faint smile, eyes narrowed against the dying sun. The pieces were falling into place, and Harbor City Prison was about to learn just how much power could change hands in a single, silent nod.

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