Breaking Point: Rise of the Kingpin

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know what I am doing



Just like that, Bruce broke another record, no one in Harbor City Prison's recent memory had been thrown into solitary so soon after release, let alone within twenty-four hours. The guards didn't even look at him as they escorted him down that grey, endless corridor. There were no lectures or taunts. Instead, the cell door slammed shut with a metallic finality, and Bruce was once again entombed in the narrow box of cold concrete. The only company was the echo of his breath and the rhythmic tap of some distant, leaking pipe.

Beyond those locked walls, his myth continued to grow. Scar had locked men down with numbers and muscle, ruling by threat and the promise of sudden violence. Bruce? He had surpassed that, ruling by the terror of unpredictability. His was the reputation of a man untethered from hope or self-preservation, someone for whom the idea of death or punishment was meaningless.

The story of Bruce Chen rolled through every block like a spark through dry grass: how he'd strode into Scar's remaining crew without flinching and fought an entire table's lots of Scar's old wolves. By lunch that day, other Scar equivalent shot-callers warned their followers: "That one's had everything taken already. Don't cross Chen if you want to see daylight."

Solitude was supposed to break the will, drive men to the edge. But for Bruce, it was instead a bitter sanctuary. He woke and burned through endless push-ups before breakfast, sweat soaking his ragged shirt. At midday, he gripped the wall and hammered his knuckles mercilessly against the pitted surface, repeating the strikes until his skin split and his arms trembled with exhaustion.

Pain and exhaustion were no longer an interruption but a meditation, a vital thread that stitched Bruce to the present moment. Each jolt of sore muscle and scrape of bruised knuckle was not just tolerated, it was welcomed, a ritual to drown out the endless undertow of loss and fury roiling in his chest. Every ache became proof that he was still here, still fighting, still defying a system that wanted him broken.

Regularly, as the hours stretched and night merging with day until only the rhythm of his own beating pulse marked the passage of time, Bruce would pause between sets, the sweat cooling on his skin, and close his eyes. In that compressed silence, he summoned the lessons Old Zhao had fed him in the infirmary. Each principle, each whispered rule, came back in vivid fragments: Never trust first impressions. When something feels off, assume there is a hidden angle. Think in threes before you move. Peer beneath every word for its shadow. How to read hesitation in body language, how a glance could signal threat or plea, why kindness in places like this too often conceals a trap. Sometimes, Bruce would silently mouth the mottos that had kept him alive: Don't act in anger, act for advantage. The most dangerous secrets are the ones that wear a friendly face. The deadliest man is the one who has nothing left to lose.

With each repetition, Bruce felt the chaos in his mind settle, the inner storm honed into quiet, razor-edged focus. The solitude of his concrete box became less a punishment and more a foundry for his will. Here, discipline was power, and memory was weapon. Each day behind that locked door, Bruce not only survived, he become stronger, he learned, recalibrated, and prepared.

And so, while the world outside gossiped about madmen and monsters, Bruce gathered himself like a storm, refined by pain, steadied by knowledge, and utterly unwilling to let the chaos inside him win. On the third day, sometime after second count, the locked door's viewing slot rattled open. Footsteps paused. A voice, solemn and familiar, drifted through the heavy steel.

"Bruce, I shouldn't have let you know about the news of your parents' incident. That must have devastated you and, I see now you completely crashed, became someone I barely recognize. Angry at the world, seeing no value in life."

Bruce froze mid-rep, sweat slicking his brow. He straightened, pressing his palm to the icy wall to steady his breath. "Officer Lin, I appreciate your concern," he managed, voice rasping, "I know what I'm doing."

A beat passed. Lin Wei sighed, an exhausted sound, rough-edged from years in the system. "Well. I hope you do. You were close this time, way too close. Another couple drops of blood in the wrong direction, and your sentence would've doubled again or worse. Could have been death, Chen." Lin's shoes scraped, as if shifting his stance out of habit.

Bruce's reply was a sullen silence, his eyes fixed somewhere in the darkness.

Lin Wei softened, picking up on that silence. "You were lucky this time. There was blood, but nobody died or severely injured. Old Zhao and several others told the truth for you, said you only defended yourself after being threatened. There were enough witnesses." There was a thin, fleeting smile in Lin's voice, as if he wished he could believe in luck.

For the first time in four months, a faint shadow of a smile flickered across Bruce's lips. It tugged at his mouth, but never reached his eyes. "Thanks, Officer Lin," he said, voice flat but not ungrateful.

Lin Wei paused, the slot still open. He was waiting for something, perhaps remorse, or an apology, or just a glimpse of the Bruce who'd stayed out of trouble his first months inside. But Bruce watched the rough pattern of light on the floor, and gave him nothing.

Lin Wei cleared his throat. "Still. As lucky as you were, your past actions mean you're stuck here for fourteen days, minimum. If you keep this up, you'll only stack more years onto your sentence. Hell, you might never walk free again."

He leaned closer, trying once more to pierce the stone: "Take this time. Think about what you're doing. Maybe you can change, maybe get your sentence reduced. If you show you're not lost."

Silence. Lin waited. Bruce met his gaze through the narrow slot, but his eyes were walled, impenetrable.

Finally, Lin Wei shook his head, slow and heavy, as if letting go of a weight he'd carried on someone else's behalf. "Alright. You make your choices, Bruce. Just know, some of us are still hoping you choose to come back." Officer Lin's footsteps dimmed, echoing off down the corridor.

The slot snapped shut, and the cold silence of the cell pressed in around Bruce once more. He flexed his bruised hands, staring upward to the shivering fluorescent light, a slow smile crept across his face, cold and satisfied. Aloud, into the thick silence that swallowed every sound, Bruce let three words slip free, his voice low but sure:"Step one… success."


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