Chapter 3: Chapter 3: THE GODDESS'S REVELATION
Chapter 3: The Goddess's Revelation
Rio's Sudden Teleportation:
As Rio completed his first quest, expand on the strange sensation that overwhelmed him. Describe the feeling of his body becoming weightless, the distorted vision, and the sudden system error message.
[WARNING: SYSTEM ERROR DETECTED] – Add Rio's panic and confusion as he tries to resist, but the force is too strong.
Elaborate on the transition—how the familiar game interface disappears, and he finds himself floating in a breathtaking sky.
Arrival in the Unknown Realm:
Describe the scenery in vivid detail—the endless clouds glowing softly, the landscape below with lush forests, towering castles, and majestic kingdoms.
Rio's awe and disbelief—his mind racing to understand whether this was a hidden zone in the game or something entirely different.
Build tension as Rio floats, helpless, trying to process his surroundings.
Meeting the Goddess:
Introduce Retina in more depth—her ethereal presence, elegant black and gold robes, and the way her silver hair shimmers under the mystical light.
Highlight her golden eyes that seem to pierce through Rio, giving him an unsettling sense that she knows far more than she reveals.
"You must be Rio." – Add Rio's hesitation as he tries to comprehend her words. His initial instinct is to assume she's a high-level NPC with a unique questline.
The Teleportation to the Palace:
Expand on the moment when Retina touches his hand. Describe the sudden shift as they teleport to the grand palace.
Paint a vivid image of the palace—the glowing magical inscriptions on the walls, the floating orbs of light, and the powerful energy pulsating through the air.
Retina's Revelation:
Explore Rio's shock and denial as Retina drops the truth—"Shadow Nexus was never a game. It was a test… and you passed."
Add Rio's internal conflict as he grapples with the impossible. He questions whether this is a dream or some elaborate event coded into the game.
Retina's calm but serious expression as she explains that Shadow Nexus is a real world, and Rio is now fully immersed in it—body and soul.
Ending Hook:
End the chapter with Rio's internal turmoil. His instincts as a gamer are screaming that this is impossible, but deep down…
"What if she's telling the truth…?"
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