Start making Honkai III, my boss is Yaya

But I didn't expect that Bengsan's follow-up would be so big, and it would conflict with the subsequent plot, so the plot of Yinglian became a complete mess.

The screenwriter didn't dare to touch this mess, so when he wrote Kallen later, he didn't dare to write Yae Sakura at all, and took a ignorant attitude.

So this plot has been criticized by many players until now, and even Kallen's reputation has always been mixed.

Then there is the question of Kiyana's name.

Similarly, in Qiyana's character design at the beginning of Bengsanyi, there is no such thing as copying people.

She is Kiyana.

But later, when the screenwriter wrote the main storyline, she arranged for her to be a clone, so Qiyana's name should naturally belong to the real Kiyana.

But since she is a clone, why is she still called Qiyana?

The screenwriter had no way to justify himself, so he could only throw the blame on Siegfried.

And because the description of Zhenqi at the beginning of the collapse of the three plots was vague, a large group of players thought that Zhenqi was tortured by the experiment at Otto.

This made the players' reputation for Ziegfried worse.

After all, your daughter was subjected to inhuman torture experiments at Otto's place. If you didn't save her, but gave her name to a replicant, what kind of father are you?

So Siegfried carried this scapegoat for a few years, until the main story revealed the identity of Youlandal, and the players realized that it was not that Siegfried didn't save Zhenqi, but

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He thought Zhenqi was dead, so he gave up.

That's why when k423 moved Siegfried with his actions, he gave her the name Kiyana.

Because in his opinion, his daughter is dead, so let k423 inherit her name. As a Siegfried European, it is understandable that he would do this.

After all, there has always been a tradition of inheriting names.

Just like Monkey King in Dragon Ball, he also took his son's name as his grandfather's name, just to commemorate it.

This plot, in fact, can be explained if it is used to explain it.

But the problem is, from the player's point of view, this is actually suspected of patching and forced explanation.

In the final analysis, it is actually a question of eating books.

If you directly stated at the beginning that both Siegfried and Teresa thought that Zhenqiyana was dead, so they gave the name to k423, then the players would not have such a big opinion.

So since Su Mu is going to do Honkai III now, he will naturally avoid these unnecessary mistakes and continue to stage it.

The first thing he needs to adjust is Yinglian's plot.

After all, he doesn't need to rely on Yinglian stickers to increase his popularity.

Let Yae Sakura and Kallen become close friends who redeem each other, there will be no problems in the plot, and Kallen's character design will not collapse.

The same is true for Qiyana's plot.

In addition, there are some other changes to the character settings.

Like Cocolia.

It's also a contradictory role.

The contradiction of Cocolia is that she is a tool to promote the plot.

Her setting is a mother who loves her children very much, but she conducted experiments on Seele and Bronya, and implanted a chip in Bronya's brain to control her. This is the classic for Pushing the plot ate the character setting.

Su Mu naturally had to make changes to this.

For example, let a child in the Cocolia Orphanage be eroded by Houkai disease and die soon. In this case, Xier took the initiative to find Cocolia, hoping to use her own experiments to find the way to save the child. Method.

There is also Bronya's chip. The official explanation is to make Bronya's brain more compatible with the reloading bunny.

That being the case, wouldn't it be okay for him to put the chip on the reloading bunny and let Bronya wear a device?

To put it bluntly, these changes made by Su Mu are to eliminate some bugs in the original plot, so that the plot can run more smoothly.

It took Su Mu a few days of work to write the main plot from the beginning to the queen's arrival after making such a change.

Of course, Su Mu also made some changes to the plots before Beng San.

Because there is no Honkai II in this world, he needs to tell the players the basic settings of Honkai, Death Warrior, Honkai Beast, Valkyrie, Destiny Anti-Entropy at the beginning.

He also deleted some unnecessary plots in the original work, and added some interesting campus daily routines to describe the relationship between Kiyana and her friends.

Especially for the part of Qiyana and Jizi, Su Mu spent more time describing the deep teacher-student relationship between the two, which is also laying the groundwork for the last lesson.

After all, in the original plot, there was very little interaction between Kiyana and Jizi. The stories between her and Jizi were all supplemented by Kiyana's memories in the Tianqiongjian chapter after the last lesson happened.

Now that there is an opportunity, Su Mu naturally wants to shape the relationship between Qiyana and Jizi in the front, so that in the last lesson, the players can empathize more!

After writing the plot of Beng San, Su Mu went to Bronya with the plan.

"Bronya, I've already done the planning of the new game."

Su Mu put the two documents on the table, then sat down on the sofa, lying down in the posture of a salted fish.

Working overtime these days to do this can be regarded as confusing him.

"So fast?"

Da Yaya was a little surprised. She thought it would take a week or two for Su Mu to hand over the plan to her, but she didn't expect it to be done so soon.

"That is, in order to play this game, I stayed up for several days and nights, and I was exhausted."

Su Mu said bitterly.

In fact, he didn't work that hard, but in front of Da Yaya, if he didn't pretend to work a little harder, how could he increase Da Yaya's favorability?

Hehe, don't say he is mean, what's wrong with being shameless just to chase girls?

"It's true that you have worked hard, but you don't need to stay up all night, right? We didn't set a deadline."

Big Duck said with some doubts.

"But don't you really want to see the new game?"

Su Mu said casually,

"Because you want to read it so much, I just want to write it quickly, is there any problem?"

"Eh?"

Da Yaya was stunned for a moment, and the hand holding the document was also stiff.

"...just because I want to see it, so you...well...you are really..."

"...that's stupid enough."

Chapter 19 No.16 Big Duck Look at Honkai III!

Sensing that Da Yaya's tone seemed strange, Su Mu raised his head, wanting to see Bronya's face, but she picked up the plan and blocked it in front of him, preventing Su Mu from seeing his current expression .

"Then look at it first, if there is anything you don't understand

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call me again. "

Su Mu said.

"Ah."

Bronya took a deep breath, and then slowly opened the file with a little excitement.

The first thing she saw was the plot and basic setting of Bengsan.

But before she watched it for a long time, Bronya was a little stunned.

"Su Mu...can you explain to me what is going on with these characters?"

Bronya's hair was black, and she stared at Su Mu with a pair of beady eyes.

"Oh, didn't I tell you all about it? There will be some characters in the game that are similar to reality."

Su Mu pretended to be calm and said.

"You call that some resemblance?"

Bronya was speechless.

Same name, same description of appearance, even personality is similar, how can this be called some similarity?

"Anyway, you agreed with me to create boldly."

Su Mu shrugged, as if a dead pig is not afraid of boiling water.

"Then you can't change your name? Why is Bronya's character in it a disabled loli with facial paralysis!"

Bronya gave Su Mu a 'vicious' look, feeling a little ashamed.

Obviously his figure is so good, but this guy put his previous appearance into it. Could it be that he likes the former Bronya more than the current self?

"The name must not be changed. If I change it, I may not have the inspiration to continue creating."

Su Mu shook his head quickly.

Are you kidding, changed the name, is it still Honkai III?

"As for why your character is a disabled loli with facial paralysis, you will know after reading the character information. Don't worry, your character is very important in the story, and it is not an exaggeration to say that you are the protagonist."

"What about Kiana and Mei? And Teacher Himeko and Principal Teresa. You even included Destiny and Anti-Entropy in it!"

Bronya didn't know what to say about Su Mu anymore.

This guy is too courageous, even the president of the Destiny Consortium and people from Anti-Entropy dared to write about it!

As for why Su Mu knew about Kiana and Mei, Bronya was not surprised. After all, this guy had been secretly in love with her for so long, and he must be very aware of the relationships around her.

"Everything is for the needs of the plot. Just say, is the plot I wrote attractive enough?"

"This... the plot you wrote, and the setting of the collapse, are indeed very novel."

Regardless of the slots, Bronya has to admit that the story written by Su Mu called Honkai III is indeed very attractive.

Whether it's the settings of Honkai and Valkyrie, or the tone of the overall story, Bronya can clearly feel that these are just one corner of the huge world view.

But it's just this part that has already firmly attracted her, not to mention the story that unfolds afterwards.

Now Bronya can understand what Su Mu means by a game that focuses on the plot.

Like those other games, the homogenization is quite serious. Except for those few classic games, players will not have much impression after basically playing other games.

But if it is this game called Honkai III, Bronya, from the perspective of a veteran game player, will definitely never forget it after she has experienced such a plot.

"Isn't that enough?"

Su Mu grinned,

"Bronya, didn't we agree? Leave the game creation to me, and leave everything else to you. We will work together to create the most classic game!"

"But....."

Bronya frowned, still hesitating.

"Well, you continue to read it first, and tell me your answer after you finish reading it."

".....All right."

Seeing Su Mu's confident look, Bronya temporarily put away her complaints and started watching again.

This time she read it more carefully, and it wasn't until three full hours had passed that she finished turning the last page.

"how do you feel?"

Su Mu poured Duck a glass of water and asked.

"Very, very powerful story."

Da Yaya put down the planning book, looked at Su Mu with eyes like a monster,

"How on earth did you come up with a story like this?"