Chapter 9
Chapter 9
Kagurazaka Ayame looked at today’s Li Yan for a moment, smiled and said, “Well, what I wore today is very handsome. It seems that you really value this party. People depend on clothes. Today you look pretty good. ”
“Really?” Li Yan was in a pretty good mood after listening.
“Yeah, I thought you would continue to wear that suit with a guide of around 10,000 yuan. Look, isn’t my prediction wrong this time?” Kagurazaka Ayame said cheerfully.
“…”
Li Yan quietly looked at Kagurazaka Acorus, who was relieved. He always felt that there were many unsolved mysteries in this world, and human beings were still so ignorant.
While Li Yan was chatting with Kagurazaka Ayame, suddenly, a short high school boy came over and was holding a pile of printed manuscripts. He looked like a high-spirited teenager. After seeing Li Yan , Showing a puzzled look.
[World: “My Sister is Teacher Huang Man”
Evaluation: A++】
When Li Yan was reminded by the system, he realized that this person and Kagurazaka Ayame are in the same world. Now that the living characters are in front of him, if it were not for the automatic review of the system, I really didn’t know that they were on his side. The world is all avatars.
“Miss Kagurazaka, and… hello.” The high school student smiled and nodded to Li Yan.
“You just came here, Teacher Izumi.”
Kagurazaka Ayame smiled and said, “I will introduce you to this, but this great writer doesn’t like being known by too many people. After introducing him to you, it’s better not to publish it, otherwise tomorrow. There is a pile of blade envelopes at the door.”
Li Yan shivered as soon as he heard the blade.
“Eh, could it be… could it be the Uesugi teacher who wrote the “Super Academy War” series?!”
The high school student writer suddenly looked surprised, and even the papers he was holding fell down, looking at Li Yan.
Why did you really guess the blade right away when you mentioned it? ! Li Yan made a thud in his heart, always feeling that his social situation is not very good.
“Yes…My real name is Li Yan. I am a foreign student. I am glad to meet you.” Li Yan said with a smile while looking in his eyes.
“Yes, it is!”
The young man smiled excitedly and said: “My name is Izumi Masamune, my fate and pen name are Izumi Masamune, and I have always been a fan of your teacher and your book!”
Chapter 8 The Love-Hate Paranoid Writer
Masamune Izumi is a light novel writer who won the light novel newcomer award. It should be said that he can get the newcomer award when he was in high school. It is only natural that he considers himself a genius.
However, after getting to know Li Yan, this part-time writer in the first grade showed him almost to the point of admiration for Li Yan. He always showed a happy and bright smile and began to speak seriously about Li Yan. Personal understanding of the “Super Academy War” written.
“On the third day when the first volume was released, I knew about this book. I bought this book decisively and looked at it. It turned out to be out of control. It’s really wonderful, no matter if the protagonist was born in an ordinary The country family has superpowers because they came into contact with the spirit of the spirit in the forest. The next step is to step by step from the weakest and weakest student, after experiencing wonderful adventures and friends’ approval, step by step, relying on their own efforts and will to finally come to it. It took two days to become a major force in the academy. I read three volumes without missing a word!”
Masamune Izumi excitedly said: “Hardly relied on any peddling, or the role of Shurachang, but it made the readers moved by the friendship in the story, and although there are few love scenes, it makes people look forward to it. I haven’t seen it for a long time. It’s so orthodox, but it’s a novel, passionate story. So I also really learned that Uesugi-sensei, you must be a genius writer who accurately conveys your heart to the hearts of readers. It’s really amazing.”
Li Yan was a little embarrassed when he heard it. He smiled and scratched the back of his head, and asked, “Is it really as exciting as you said?”
“It should be said that my eloquence can’t describe my deeper reading feelings. The biggest purpose of my coming to the party today is to be able to see Teacher Uesugiyan in person.”
Masamune Izumi made a fist, saying as if he was talking about his beliefs.
“…Thank you very much, but hearing you say that…it’s too exaggerated.” Li Yan said with a wry smile.
However, Li Yan looked at Izumi Masamune’s eyes, that pair of passion for light novels and a sense of perseverance. In the future, this newcomer award winner will definitely be able to stand at a higher position. After all, it is edited by Kagurazaka Ayame. Ability cannot misunderstand people.
“Well, are you here…well, I will pick you up right now, you are the only thing here.”
While Li Yan and Izumi Masamune were exchanging their experiences, Kagurazaka Ayame received a call. She turned off the phone and said with a smile to Li Yan and Izumi Masamune, “Excuse me, I will pick someone up now, although ten It’s two o’clock, but the hotel’s official dinner time is at 12:30. On the one hand, I hope that the writers can make friends and communicate with each other in half an hour, just like you are like-minded. On the other hand, I hope you can make friends and communicate with each other in half an hour. , And also take care of the writer who came from other places. It’s still the last one. I drove to pick her up.”
“Are you busy.” Li Yan nodded and said.
“Thanks.” Izumi Masamune bowed slightly and said.
As for the bowing etiquette, Li Yan is still not used to it. Although the bowing etiquette was first passed to Japan from the Central Plains, now China has replaced bowing with a handshake, but Japan has remained unchanged.
Besides, his waist was still aching.
After watching Kagurazaka Ayame leave, Li Yan saw that in this luxurious hotel, many writers had already become a small group. They were communicating with each other, and many of them heard some familiar pen names of popular writers. However, it seems that his name has not been heard by the writers over there just now. It is probably because of too noisy, which is considered a kind of luck.
Li Yan doesn’t like too many people knowing his identity.
“It’s really the same feeling as a group of heroes. The elites of Sanhe Library are here.”
Li Yan thought.
“Ms. Uesugi, wait for me, I’ll take you to introduce it to you later.”
Masamune Izumi was squatting on the ground nervously looking back at the dropped documents, and said to Li Yan who was in a daze.
Li Yan came back to his senses and immediately leaned down to help pick it up together, only to find that these were actually printed novel manuscripts. He couldn’t help but ask: “Is the manuscript of the novel?”
“Yes, I originally planned to take advantage of Ms. Kagurazaka’s presence here, and hope she can help me review the manuscript again…”
“So that’s it, that… can I take a look?”
Li Yan suddenly became interested. He hadn’t seen the work written by this newcomer who liked his work so much. After reading a few lines, he became a little interested and asked.
Masamune Izumi was taken aback for a moment, then he reacted and said, “Dang, of course, please!”
For reviewers, of course, you need to find a quiet place. Now the quietest place on the second floor is at a conference table seat in the corridor. Li Yan took the large pile of manuscripts and placed them neatly on the table. Go up and start to look at it for yourself.
Although he can directly use the editing system in his consciousness to complete it in a few seconds without anyone else, since he volunteered to review Masamune Izumi’s novel, he naturally needs to read it carefully with his own eyes.
According to the structure of light novels, a manuscript with more than one hundred thousand words is only a few hundred words per page, so it can be read very quickly.
Zhengzong Izumi sat nervously next to Li Yan, always wanting to ask this master’s opinion, but after seeing Li Yan’s focused eyes, he didn’t dare to bother.
It took twenty minutes to read the 110,000-word manuscript, including the project plan and the first volume of the main text.
“…”
Li Yan was silent, somewhat unable to speak.
It should be said that there are still merits. After all, it is a work written by a professional writer. It is only slightly rough in the portrayal of the characters and the arrangement of the plot, and is too obsessed with some ability settings to let the fighting plot. It doesn’t seem to be very exciting, these are mistakes that are easy for authors who lack deep writing experience to make.
What’s more, it’s the plot of this book about my sister. The love scene is too heavy, and it almost occupies a quarter of the plot of the hot-blooded novel.
Li Yan squinted, wondering why he wrote about the ambiguous daily routine with his sister so intensively.
Soon, Li Yan used the editing system again to start scanning, so as not to make a mistake in his own judgment.
【Work Name: Valkyrie Armor
Evaluation: C+
Suggestion: As a hot-blooded novel, it lacks enough blood and is more inclined to love and fantasy. The character description is not deep enough. The plot should be more profound. You can consider modifying the details of contradictions and conflicts. 】