Chapter 15
That night, the sky was overcast.
Because it had just rained, there was no moon or stars in the sky.
The dark night enveloped the apartment building, making it deserted.
In the elevator room of the apartment building,
Yang Qiaoan's petite face was leaning on Bai Chengze's shoulder. She was already fast asleep.
She found this position with great difficulty.
Previously, the two of them were leaning against each other, talking and laughing, talking about a lot of family issues, and each told the other a lot about their worries.
Later, sleepiness hit, and Yang Qiaoan gradually lost strength.
Being trapped in the cold, she unconsciously rubbed herself against Bai Chengze's body, looking for a little warmth.
Because she was sitting on the ground, her posture was very stiff.
Yang Qiaoan wanted to fall asleep, but couldn't. She was tormented by the sleepiness and coldness for a while.
She repeatedly adjusted several positions.
Finally, she and Bai Chengze leaned side by side against the inner wall of the elevator. fell asleep
"Why is it so wet?"
Bai Chengze touched Yang Qiao'an's forearm.
At this moment, Qiao An lowered her head slightly, half-opened her mouth, and her saliva was like a line, dripping, and about to break.
Out of kindness, Bai Chengze wiped her.
He Gently rubbing Yang Qiao'an's arm,
Qiao An's skin was smooth and refreshing, like a baby covered in talcum powder. Bai Chengze pulled Yang Qiao'an's arm into his arms, and then wiped his saliva on his clothes.
Gently, he unfolded his coat and covered himself and Qiao An.
The two of them were huddled together, covered by a small"quilt".
Yang Qiao'an's breathing was steady and even in Bai Chengze's ear.
After a while, Yang Qiaoan seemed to feel a little cold in his sleep, and he hugged himself subconsciously and moved his smooth and slightly cold legs.
Bai Chengze leaned forward.
The back of his hand was passively pressed against her leg.
Thinking of this, Bai Chengze gently brushed Qiao An's calf.
He placed his palms on her knees.
He hoped that this would bring some warmth to the other person.
Bai Chengze's palms were constantly releasing heat, as if they were instilling internal energy into Qiao An.
After a while, Yang Qiao An felt cold.
As expected , his knees became much warmer.
After the good man did it, Bai Chengze put his hands on Qiao An's cold thighs again.
In this way, he worked hard for a while, feeling satisfied in his heart, as if he had done something great.
Like a big deal, when his hands reached Yang Qiaoan's ankles, Qiao An finally couldn't help but move.
"That..." In the darkness, she spoke softly in Bai Chengze's ear,"Mr. Chengze, have you touched enough?"
"ah?
Bai Chengze quickly retracted his hand and explained seriously:"Your body is so cold, I want to warm you up.""
"I know, Mr. Chengze, you don’t need to explain."Yang Qiao'an said.
After saying that, Qiao An yawned and leaned against Bai Chengze again.
The two of them cuddled together, Qiao An's little hands hooked together, and gently held one of Bai Chengze's fingers.
It didn't take long. , she fell asleep again.
After Qiao An fell asleep, Bai Chengze searched in his personal space for a while, found two thicker clothes, and gently covered himself and Qiao An.
In fact, for tonight. Bai Chengze still feels a little bit sorry about it, because with his strength, he can easily open an elevator door, just like drinking cold water.
In addition, it's not like he doesn't have a mobile phone.
On the contrary, There are many mobile phones in Bai Chengze's personal space, all of which were recovered from the corpses of the Viper Gang.
However, out of a little selfishness, Bai Chengze made a mistake at the beginning, and finally made a mistake.
After a while, Bai Chengze felt sleepy and tilted his head towards
Yang Qiao'an, closing his eyes. Heads touching each other, you hit me and I hit you, letting out bursts of steady and long breaths
……
The next day, Bai Chengze woke up leisurely.
It was still dark inside the elevator, but through the gap in the cabin door, there was a faint light that could be seen coming in.
Bai Chengze put the two pieces of clothes into his carry-on space.
He heard the rustling of footsteps outside the elevator door and the voices of two people talking.
"Did it stop here?"
"There shouldn't be anything wrong."
At the same time, Yang Qiaoan was lying on her back with her mouth open, leaning on Bai Chengze's shoulder, sleeping soundly.
Bai Chengze gently shook her awake,"Miss Qiaoan, someone is here to save us."
"Ah, is that so? Yang Qiaoan woke up murmuring and yawned long.
She took advantage of the dim light and secretly glanced at Bai Chengze beside her, then straightened her body and said,"I really should thank you, Mr. Chengze.""
"Why are you saying this?"Bai Chengze said lightly.
"If there is a chance," Yang Qiao paused,"maybe I can invite you to my house for a meal?"
The two of them live alone in an apartment and are neighbors separated by a wall, so it is very convenient to visit for a meal.
After thinking about it, Bai Chengze immediately agreed.
It's just a meal, it shouldn't be a big deal, right?
—————————————— ps: After thinking about it, I decided to talk about it.
As mentioned in the introduction, the content of this book is mainly composed of Korean comics and Korean dramas.
Since there are two aspects of content, there are bound to be some inevitable conflicts.
Most Korean comics are about YY, pure love, bloody love, and the love between children.
Han Zong is much broader in scope, like a pot of stew.
The author thought a lot when writing the outline, because there are many lessons learned from this platform.
Ten out of ten books that only wrote about Han Zong ended up with around 200,000 words.
This also shows that Han Zong’s market is indeed limited and its future is slim.
So the author took a desperate risk and incorporated Korean comics into it.
I have to say that Korean comics are indeed more attractive.
You can tell by looking at the trend in the comment area that most readers come here for Korean comics.
This also shows that the author has to serve two groups at the same time.
Those who watch Korean comics will find the content of Korean comics disgusting and greasy, and they dislike it from the bottom of their hearts.
Those who read Korean comics may prefer that the author focus most of his words on the key heroines and pay less attention to other content.
Therefore, it is difficult to balance the relationship between the two and plan the intensity of the ink.
At the same time, everyone also knows that if you just focus on promoting women, you will definitely end up being screwed.
As for the main plot, the author chose the underworld theme, which is relatively popular and he is good at.
Because the author has written about Hong Kong variety shows before, he has a good idea of the upgrade routine in this area, and the possibility of collapse is very small.
In the underworld theme pool, the focus is"Crime City"》、《new world》、《yellow sea》、《mean streets》、《Bad Guys".
The comic that appeared during this period was"Fitness"》、《Neighbor》、《Vacant room》、《lawyer》、《"Chu Xi" and so on.
In addition, at this stage, there will be a heart-warming subplot of adopting Koo Ja-yoon as a child.
Everyone knows that fan fiction is fan fiction, and since everyone comes to read it, it is for the sake of being a fan.
So many times, the protagonist must break into the plot, so that there can be a connection between the two.
So when to do something has become a very critical thing.
Can't the protagonist still live in an apartment with four empty sisters after becoming president?
You can't just meet your neighbor Yang Qiaoan after moving into the villa, right?
Therefore, in order to make some characters appear less inconsistent, there must be a transition in the identity of the protagonist to appear smooth and normal.
Therefore, the pace of the plot is slow because some characters must appear during this period. After this period, she will no longer be good.
For example, in the early stage of the heroine Yang Qiaoan, if there is not enough foreshadowing, too little ink, not enough warmth, and not enough blood, then the excitement will be much less when it is promoted.
Of course, you can choose to promote quickly or choose to travel in a round, but it would be meaningless to write like that. Without YY stuff, it would be better to just read the comics.
Another example is Aunt Enai in the middle period.
Everyone likes to watch Enai because they like the step-by-step process.
Every inch of progress brings joy.
If Zihao had pushed Auntie away in the first chapter, the excitement and sense of anticipation would be gone, and"Teaching" wouldn't be as popular as it is now, right?
Speaking of the middle period, after the underworld theme is written, the protagonist has a foundation for development.���With industry and manpower, there will be a period of farming.
Because as written before, the protagonist has the identity of"Bai Pu".
There is no hiding here.
Bai Pu is an unscrupulous man who has run away from home for many years. He is also the homeless man who was killed by the protagonist at the beginning.
His father is a wealthy tycoon, and he is just such an heir.
The reason why Bai Pu ran away from home was because his father married his loving aunt, his stepmother.
His father was desperately ill because he was eager to find his son.
He saw the increasingly famous Bai Pu (the protagonist) on TV and mistakenly thought that he was his long-lost son (because the protagonist had his ID card and looked very similar, with a buttocks). They all had tooth marks), found him back, and let him inherit the family property.
After just meeting each other, the wish was fulfilled, and the meal was over.
So the protagonist picked up a group, a loving stepmother, and three sisters for nothing.
The patch here for Enai is that Bai Pu's father fell ill as soon as she entered the house and has been lying on the hospital bed, so the two have never been in contact.
In other words, although the aunt is still the same aunt and the persona is still the same person who doesn't know how to refuse, she has another identity, that is, she has a young heart, likes to watch short movies secretly, has rich theoretical experience and zero practical experience, so In a tangled state, she must be overflowing with motherly love, she loves the protagonist especially, and she especially hopes to make up for the mistakes she has caused.
(As for the key characters, the author will make some patches. They will definitely not be dirty, let alone NTR, but the character design cannot be changed. If it is changed, it will no longer be that interesting. So the aunt is still the same aunt, and Qiao An is still the same Qiao An. It’s distinctive and everyone understands it.)
The protagonist wears something that has no blood relationship with Enai and the three sisters, but they all regard the protagonist as a younger brother who has not experienced much in the world and has suffered a lot outside.
Of course, the plot is still based on the theme of"teaching". Everyone knows that sister and affection are taught bit by bit, and the protagonist learns bit by bit.
In addition, at this stage,"The Top Floor" will be added》、《"Druna", focusing on the strategy of Teacher Qian, Zhang Manyue and Shen Xiulian.
The reason why we moved to the top floor is because the protagonist has become successful. There is nothing wrong with entering the top floor. The main line is from the 30th floor to the 100th floor.
The reason why Zhang Manyue appears is because the protagonist committed too many crimes in the early stage and there are many ghosts haunting him.
In addition, the protagonist in this period is already a chaebol, so he will be"TheK2"》、《IRIS》The official organization here harassed them, and introduced sisters Jin Shanhua and Jin Xiuhua, as well as Cui Youzhen and Anna, mother and daughter (Cui Youzhen is Bai Pu's distant aunt, which is reasonable).
As for comics, it's"Teaching"》、《"Supermarket Sister" (there is a sister who works in a supermarket),"New World" (the protagonist owns an office building), and so on.
Goo Ja-yoon was discovered by the organization, so the super powers of"Witch" appeared, and the light and weird plot of"Druna" between Yin and Yang worlds, the protagonist's opponents also upgraded accordingly.
Therefore, throughout the middle period, there is still a lot to write about. According to the outline, the subject matter will definitely be sufficient.
Later on, the protagonist sat at the Blue House for a while and became the president for a while (related to the election of Mrs. Choi Youjin’s husband).
Then the zombie crisis broke out. The protagonist had 100% fusion with Vanma, plus 20 skill cheats, leading everyone to defeat monsters and gain points.
During this period, there will be a survival stream, a tower defense stream, and a leadership stream. The theme is to eliminate the zombie crisis. There is not much to say.
At this stage, after experiencing strong winds and waves and ebbs and flows, the protagonist has become more divine and will abandon some human things. His opponent is no longer a certain person or organization, but has risen to the level of right and wrong. Became a decision-maker with the power of life and death.
In terms of plot, the storyline of"Train to Busan" has been included, and"Zombie Campus" will be linked with the popular characters of"The Walking Dead".
In terms of comics, there will be some"Slaves"》、《"Training House" and other more heavy-tongued stuff.
This is the overall idea of this book. Because the collection results are quite satisfactory, the author spent some time making an outline and writing some detailed outlines, hoping to write a longer Korean comprehensive book.
The author of the overall routine has nothing to hide, and that's probably it.
If the content is not what you want to see, then you can stop when you see it. There is no need to make yourself unhappy, right?
Of course, the reality must be harsh, and the author is mentally prepared.
How long you can write depends mainly on your overall performance.
Finally, I shamelessly asked for a wave of data. I haven’t asked for data much. I hope I can get more Huahua Piao and monthly passes. Thank you in advance!
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