Genshin Impact: Frostburn

Chapter 28: Update: Pitstop 1



You guys have read up to this point. The purpose of this pitstop is to gauge your liking for this story and to interact with everyone. I now have a clear view of the direction, I just need a bit more lore to be released in order to put together my thoughts. Not easy, but it's there XD.

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Now with all that said, here's the update.

So, I've been thinking, maybe I should switch to 3rd person narrative from now on. My idea is to make this story progress a bit faster and to include growth? I don't know why I suddenly decided to do this XD. But tell me what you guys think. This is my first time writing so I don't have any experience.

I said this before but I'm pretty indecisive XD.

Sorry for the XD it's a habit of mine.

The harem part is nah, it doesn't sit well with me. I think I could make it work but I just don't like it in this story in particular. Maybe I should make a new one with a system and put harem in it who knows XD.

Anyway thanks for reading up to this point.

The next chapter or two will conclude this arc.


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