Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Beast Beneath
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[VISUAL] Wide shot of the ship flying through deep space. A distant, almost imperceptible glimmer follows behind in the black—fast, sleek, wrong.
NARRATION (RAIN):I felt it before I saw it.A presence. Predatory. Watching.But I said nothing.Not yet.
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[VISUAL] Inside the ship's fabrication bay. Holograms of android schematics float mid-air. Dawn and VEE Prime are mid-argument—loud.
VEE PRIME:I want a body that turns heads! I want curves! Big boobs! Big butt! Thick thighs! That "step on me" aura!
DAWN (deadpan):You're a data cluster, Vee. You don't need tits. You need stability and a spine servomotor.
VEE PRIME (mock gasp):Wow. So internalized misogyny is real. I just want to feel hot like you! Is that a crime?!
[VISUAL] Dawn sighs, dragging a hand down her face.
DAWN:You don't have hormones! You're literally mimicking what you saw on a fanfiction board!
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[VISUAL] VEE flashes a holographic mock-up of herself—with an over-the-top anime body, massive mechanical curls, and glowing heels.
VEE PRIME:Imagine the intimidation factor. "This AI ends lives and has ass for days."The galaxy won't know what hit it.
DAWN (muttering):I'm going to build you like a damn toaster if you keep talking.
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[VISUAL] Meanwhile, Rain is sitting near the main window. Eyes blank. Breathing slow. Behind him, stars drift… and so does the predator.
[VISUAL] Suddenly, Kai's hologram doesn't appear—instead, KAI stands outside the ship's hull in full gravity gear, tapping on the window.
RAIN (quiet):Of course you are.
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[VISUAL] Exterior airlock. Rain steps outside the ship, joining Kai atop the hull. They stand in silence for a moment, gazing into the dark.
KAI:So. Gonna tell me why you're acting like a coiled spring?
RAIN (still watching space):We're being followed.
[VISUAL] Beat. Kai doesn't react. Just nods.
KAI:Yeah. I know.
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[VISUAL] Rain looks over, frowning. Kai doesn't look back.
RAIN:You knew?
KAI:Of course. I just didn't want to stress you out.
RAIN (annoyed):Stress me out? Someone's tailing us and you thought I needed a nap?
KAI (calm):You're not the same anymore. You're not running on instincts. You're running on something older. And it's not synced yet.
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[VISUAL] Kai sits on the edge of the ship's wing, legs dangling in zero-g.
KAI:When you trained at the GTN, your energy was comprehendible. Predictable.But now? You're housing a creature that once ate suns like candy and screamed planets into dust.
RAIN:Cool. Totally manageable.
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[VISUAL] Kai leans in, more serious now.
KAI:You're not in control, Rain.The dragon—whatever it is—is sleeping. But if it wakes before you're ready, you won't just lose control.You'll erase everything in front of you.
RAIN (quiet):So what do I do?
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[VISUAL] Abstract panel—Rain standing inside a void of fire and stars, facing a silhouette of a massive draconic figure behind a veil of gold.
KAI (voiceover):You talk to it.Not like an enemy. Not like a tool.You meet it. On your own terms.
KAI:This isn't power you wield. It's a soul you have to understand.
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[VISUAL] Rain stands, backlit by the stars, fists clenched.
RAIN:So I have to go soul-searching. While someone wants me dead.Perfect.
KAI (rising beside him):You're not alone. But this part?Yeah. You've gotta step into the fire alone.
[VISUAL] The camera pans back as the presence in the distance begins to shimmer—drawing closer. A humanoid figure with a molten skeletal frame and a weaponized halo.
NARRATION (RAIN):And as if on cue…Mourn sends another piece across the board.
NARRATION (RAIN):Another Pawn.
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[VISUAL] Inside the ship, lights dim. Rain sits alone in the meditation chamber—cross-legged on a glowing circular pad. He takes a deep breath.
NARRATION (RAIN):Kai said I had to talk to it.The thing inside me.The dragon.
[VISUAL] A soft hum builds. Rain's eyes flicker golden.
RAIN (internal):Okay. You're in there. Somewhere.Let's talk.
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[VISUAL] Rain's mind slips into a surreal void—black sky, golden fog swirling around. Huge stars drift by like debris. Then, a THUD shakes the space.
[VISUAL] A colossal silhouette moves behind the fog. Golden eyes flash like dying suns. It breathes once—and the void trembles.
RAIN (internal):That's you…The dragon.
[VISUAL] The creature doesn't speak. Just watches.
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RAIN (internal):I need control. I can't keep blacking out. I can't keep risking people.Just… talk to me.
[VISUAL] The fog pulses. The silhouette shifts slightly—but doesn't come closer. No words. Just breathing.
RAIN (internal):Fine. I'll start. My name's Rain.I'm not a weapon.I'm not your host.I'm a person.
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[VISUAL] The dragon snorts. A blast of heat surges past Rain, pushing him back. The void flickers.
RAIN (internal):Why won't you answer?!You gave me power. You burned through me like lightning. But now when I need you… you hide?
[VISUAL] The dragon opens its eyes fully—bright, ancient, unblinking. But still silent.
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[VISUAL] The space starts to collapse. Rain's breathing grows erratic. Echoes of the ship flicker in the background—Kai's voice, Dawn yelling, the sound of warning sirens.
NARRATION (RAIN):I can't focus.They're coming.I know they're coming.And I'm wasting time in here.
RAIN (internal):Say something! Help me!
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[VISUAL] The dragon finally speaks—but not with words. A single emotion floods Rain's mind: Disappointment.
DRAGON (voice like tectonic plates shifting):You are not ready. You fear the wind at your back more than the fire in your chest.
[VISUAL] The golden fog swallows Rain whole. He's yanked violently out of the vision.
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[VISUAL] Rain jolts awake, coughing—steam rising from his back. The meditation pad is cracked beneath him. Kai is standing nearby.
KAI:Let me guess. Didn't go well?
RAIN (panting):It… looked at me.It felt me. But it wouldn't speak. Just stared. Judged.
KAI (calm):It's not a god. It's you. It's just the part of you that hurts the most.You're trying to tame it with fear still stuck in your head.
RAIN:I'm not afraid of it.
KAI:You're afraid of losing control. Same thing.
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[VISUAL] VEE PRIME's voice cuts in over comms. Her tone is sharp—unnervingly cold.
VEE PRIME:Sorry to interrupt your spiritual meltdown, but our tail just decloaked.
[VISUAL] Outside the ship—descending fast—is a humanoid figure shrouded in molten armor, dragging a floating black cube behind them. Their eyes glow red.
VEE PRIME (cont'd):Another Pawn. Bigger than the last one.And it's got tools.
[VISUAL] Rain's eyes glow faintly—but the fire sputters. He grits his teeth.
RAIN (quietly):Guess I fight… without knowing who I am.
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[VISUAL] An obsidian throne floats at the heart of a broken dimension—time warped, stars frozen mid-collapse.
[VISUAL] MOURN sits, silent. His form shifts slowly—part cloaked humanoid, part cosmic storm. Before him floats a translucent orb: a surveillance feed crackling with static.
MOURN (quietly):Show me the beast.Show me the host.
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**[VISUAL] The feed clears for a second—Rain meditating in the void, facing the golden silhouette of the dragon. Then—**BOOM—the image distorts violently, filling with light and static.
[VISUAL] Glyphs flash across the orb—ancient Zur'ahk script, unreadable.
MOURN (rising):What is this…?
[VISUAL] The feed violently rejects his gaze. The orb cracks and melts into black vapor. Mourn's eye glows—not with rage, but uncertainty.
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[VISUAL] Mourn walks to a nearby vault of relics. Inside: massive fossilized bones of a dragon, tangled with machinery. Some bones pulse faintly with forgotten energy.
MOURN:The Zur'ahk were gone. I saw them burn.I scattered their hearts across galaxies. I erased them.
[VISUAL] His hand hovers over one bone. It twitches slightly.
MOURN (gritting his teeth):Then why… can't I see him?
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[VISUAL] Mourn returns to the broken orb's remains. A single Zur'ahk glyph flickers one last time—then vanishes.
MOURN (to himself):Something is blocking me.The beast is aware.This is not possession…This is cohabitation.
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[VISUAL] He steps toward a massive obsidian wall lined with runes—each one a name of a dead dragon. The last one glows faintly, unmarked.
MOURN:You should not exist.And yet you rise.Unrecorded. Unreadable.
[VISUAL] Mourn places a hand on the final rune. It sparks.
MOURN:Then we'll force it into the open.
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[VISUAL] One of Mourn's Pawns kneels in the void behind him—black armor, a jagged blade, and a helmet that looks like it was forged in a scream.
MOURN (coldly):Go to him. Test the threshold.See what stirs when he bleeds.
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[VISUAL] The Pawn steps into a collapsing rift gate. Behind him, Mourn stares into the void. For the first time… unsure.
MOURN (whispering):If it is truly Zur'ahk…Then this will either awaken it—Or destroy it.
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[VISUAL] Wide panel. Back outside Rain's ship. The stars ripple—like glass warping underwater—as a jagged rift tears open above them.
[VISUAL] Through the rift steps the Pawn—not just a warrior, but a force.
[VISUAL] Its form is humanoid but wrong. Built of molten obsidian and bone. Its arms are blade-like, fingers twitching with psychic static. Its head has no eyes—only a spinning void at its center.
SFX: VOOOOOMMMMM
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[VISUAL] Rain steps forward from the ship's hull, face calm but eyes twitching. The golden flicker in his irises flares for a second—then dies.
[VISUAL] The Pawn lands silently across from him, the rift closing behind it. No words. No threat. Just stillness.
RAIN (thinking):It's testing me.It's not here to kill me.Not yet.
[VISUAL] The two stand in space—no sound, only their breathing and the slow hum of the ship behind them.
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[VISUAL] Inside the ship: DAWN and VEE are still mid-argument, unaware. The screen behind them flickers, showing the descending energy signature.
VEE PRIME (annoyed):You know what? Fine. Make me flat-chested. But I'm adding rocket boots and claws.
DAWN (sighing):You're lucky I don't install a kill switch.
[VISUAL] Suddenly, a red alarm flares.
VEE PRIME:Oh. Shit.Rain's in trouble.
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[VISUAL] Outside. The Pawn's arm morphs—flesh turning into a blade-like edge dripping with light.
[VISUAL] It lunges forward at blinding speed, slashing where Rain stood.
[VISUAL] Rain dodges—barely—skidding across the ship's hull, sparks flying.
RAIN (thinking):Fast. Too fast.Not human.
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[VISUAL] Rain retaliates. He draws a short blade—etched with stellar markings. A gift from the GTN blacksmiths.
[VISUAL] He swings—clean, samurai form. The blade connects…
SFX: TSSHHH!
[VISUAL] The cut lands cleanly—but the Pawn's arm reforms almost instantly. Flesh turns to liquid metal and regrows around the slash like nothing happened.
[VISUAL] Rain takes a step back, eyes wide, blade raised again.
RAIN:What in the fucking Terminator…?
[VISUAL] The Pawn just tilts its head, unreadable. Its body still glitching slightly from the hit. But healing. Perfectly.
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[VISUAL] The Pawn raises a hand—an energy blast charges in its palm. Rain's eyes flicker gold again—the dragon energy responding, but faint. Still dormant.
[VISUAL] He throws his blade into the beam, causing a burst that knocks both of them back.
[VISUAL] Rain tumbles across the hull, coughing. He touches his chest—heat building inside him. The dragon stirs.
RAIN (thinking):I need you.Not to kill.Just to move.
[VISUAL] Nothing.
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[VISUAL] The Pawn leaps again—its arm now a glowing spear. It slams down—Rain dodges again but slower.
[VISUAL] The Pawn suddenly speaks—its voice a chorus of whispers and screams.
PAWN:Flawed flesh.Unfinished flame.You are not it.Not yet.
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[VISUAL] Rain steadies himself. He's bleeding now. His lip split. He stares the Pawn down with clenched fists.
RAIN:No.I'm not it.But it's watching.So maybe fight me like you mean it.
[VISUAL] Golden steam begins to rise from his shoulders—a spark. The first sign.
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[VISUAL] Inside the ship, VEE and DAWN reach the window. They see Rain facing the creature alone, breathing hard, shoulders shaking.
VEE PRIME (softly):That thing's testing him.Trying to wake the dragon.And it's working.
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[VISUAL] Rain steps back, sweat dripping down his brow. The steam from his shoulders fades. No golden glow. No heat. Just silence.
[VISUAL] His hands tremble slightly as he holds his stance.
RAIN (thinking):Come on. Stars. Fire.Give me something.Anything.
[VISUAL] Nothing. The dragon stays silent. The stars don't answer.
RAIN:…Seriously?
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[VISUAL] The Pawn walks forward, slow and deliberate, molten obsidian armor twitching like it's alive. His voice is low, fractured—like it's remembering how to speak.
PAWN:Designation: Specimen X-5C.Codename: "Gravedust."
[VISUAL] Cracks split across his chest, glowing with unstable violet light.
GRAVEDUST (formerly Pawn):Prototype anomaly suppressor.First of the Nullborn.Built to hunt things like you…...before we understood how wrong that was.
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[VISUAL] Rain stands motionless, processing it. His breath frosts slightly from the tension.
RAIN:"Gravedust," huh?Sounds like a rejected metal band.But sure—let's dance.
GRAVEDUST:I was not meant to win.Only to test.To see if the next one would need sharper teeth.
RAIN:Guess you'll find out the hard way.
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[VISUAL] The battle gets tight. Close quarters. The Pawn swings again—Rain ducks low, grabs a cable hanging from the ship's side, and wraps it around the Pawn's arm.
SFX: WHIP-CRACK
[VISUAL] Using the cable's tension, Rain pulls himself up—leaping over the Pawn's shoulder and slamming his knee into the back of its head.
RAIN:You ever get dropkicked by instinct, bitch?
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[VISUAL] The Pawn stumbles. Rain lands hard, rolls, grabs a maintenance pipe from the side of the ship, and swings it like a bat—smashing it into the back of the Pawn's knee.
SFX: CRUNCH!
[VISUAL] The Pawn collapses to one leg. Glitching. Cracking.
PAWN (rasping):Adapt… adapt… adapt—
RAIN (out loud):No time to adapt if I break you faster than you can think.
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[VISUAL] Rain jams the pipe into the back of the Pawn's spine—twists—and hits a small glowing core. The Pawn seizes up.
[VISUAL] Rain kicks off the pipe, backflips away as the core begins to pulse—unstable.
VEE PRIME (over comms):RAIN, MOVE. IT'S GONNA—
[VISUAL] BOOM. The Pawn explodes in a violet shockwave, raining down fragments across the hull. Rain rolls, shields himself with his arms.
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[VISUAL] Silence. Smoke. Rain coughs and slowly rises from the wreckage. His arms bleeding. Clothes torn.
RAIN (breathing hard):No stars.No dragon.Still alive.
[VISUAL] He looks up at the sky—angry, but defiant.
RAIN:You're watching, right?Then next time…Fight with me.