Chapter 8: "Breaking Barriers"
Mia spent the next few days pouring herself into writing, her notebook filling with words faster than she had anticipated. The excitement of creating something from nothing fueled her, but along with it came the ever-present doubt—was she really good enough? Would anyone ever care about her stories?
She had told herself that writing was for her and her alone, but deep down, she longed for someone to see the world through her words. Still, the fear of rejection kept her from taking the next step. She kept rewriting sentences, deleting entire passages, convincing herself that nothing she wrote was good enough.
One evening, as she sat by her window, staring at the city lights, she received a message from Lucas.
Lucas: I have an idea. Meet me at the park?
Curious, she grabbed her notebook and headed out. When she arrived, Lucas was waiting with a determined look in his eyes. In his hands was his sketchbook, the pages filled with new designs.
"You look like you've been busy," Mia said, nodding toward it.
He smirked. "Same could be said about you."
She hesitated before handing him her notebook. He took it without hesitation, flipping through the pages. The longer he read, the softer his expression became.
"This is amazing, Mia," he said finally.
Mia let out a nervous laugh. "You always say that."
"Because it's true." He met her gaze. "Have you thought about sharing it?"
She stiffened. "You mean, like… letting other people read it?"
"Yeah." He tapped a page with his finger. "Your words deserve to be seen."
Mia bit her lip. "I don't know, Lucas. What if people hate it?"
"What if they love it?" he countered. "You'll never know unless you try."
She sighed, looking at the notebook in his hands. It was easy to pour her heart into writing when no one else would see it. But the thought of letting others in—of making herself vulnerable—terrified her.
Lucas must have sensed her hesitation because he smiled reassuringly. "How about this? We both take a step forward. I'll submit my designs to a firm I've been considering if you agree to share a chapter online."
Mia's eyes widened. "You'd do that?"
He nodded. "I believe in you, Mia. I just need you to believe in yourself, too."
The warmth in his voice wrapped around her like a safety net. She inhaled deeply, considering his words. Maybe she wasn't ready to put her entire heart out for the world to see, but one step—one chapter—was something she could manage.
"Okay," she whispered. "I'll do it."
Lucas grinned. "Then we both have a deal."
They sat in the park for a while longer, talking about their dreams, their fears, and the what-ifs that kept them up at night. The conversation flowed easily, and for the first time in a long time, Mia felt like she wasn't alone in her struggle.
That night, as Mia sat in front of her laptop, her fingers hovered over the 'publish' button. Fear clung to her, whispering doubts into her mind. What if people criticized her? What if no one read it at all? What if she was wasting her time?
But then she thought of Lucas—of his unwavering belief in her, of the way he was willing to take a chance, too. He was risking his own dreams alongside hers, and that gave her courage.
Taking a deep breath, she clicked the button.
A message popped up: Your story has been published.
Her heart pounded as she stared at the screen. There was no turning back now.
Minutes passed, and then an hour. She refreshed the page, half-expecting no one to have seen it yet. But then, a notification appeared.
1 new comment.
Her hands trembled as she clicked it.
Reader123: I love this! Your writing is so vivid. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Mia gasped, rereading the words over and over. Someone out there had read her words and liked them. For the first time, she felt a rush of validation, of excitement. Maybe, just maybe, she could do this.
Her phone vibrated. A message from Lucas.
Lucas: Told you.
She let out a breathless laugh, typing back quickly.
Mia: You were right.
And just like that, she had taken her first real step forward. The fear was still there, lingering at the edges, but now it was accompanied by something stronger—hope.