Chains of Divinity

Chapter 29: Faith's Edge



Candlelight flickered across ancient stones as Orin knelt before the divine altar. The sacred chamber felt oppressive in its silence, the weight of countless prayers hanging heavy in the air. His armor, usually gleaming with divine light, seemed dull in the darkness.

"Great ones," his voice was raw, desperate, yet still carried the steel of conviction, "I seek your wisdom. Tell me who among us is betraying you."

Silence answered.

His fists clenched against the cold stone floor. He bowed his head deeper, breathing heavily. "I have done everything you asked. I have fought in your name. I have slain your enemies. I have devoted my very soul to you."

Nothing.

The silence felt deafening. The gods—who had always spoken through visions, through whispers, through signs—remained mute. For the first time in his life, their champion felt truly alone.

His breathing grew unsteady as memories flooded his mind. He remembered his first divine vision, how the gods had shown him his purpose, had filled him with their light. He remembered every battle fought in their name, every victory dedicated to their glory. He had never questioned, never doubted.

Why now? Why this silence when he needed them most?

Then, like divine inspiration, understanding struck him. This wasn't abandonment—this was a test. The gods had always tested their champions. Hadn't they tested Zephyr before granting him power? Hadn't they pushed every hero to prove themselves worthy?

"I understand now," he whispered, his voice growing stronger. "You want me to prove myself. To show that I can root out corruption without divine guidance. To demonstrate that my faith is strong enough to act on its own."

The more he thought about it, the clearer it became. The gods had given him signs already—the failed battle, the suspicious vision, the growing doubts among their forces. They weren't ignoring him; they were showing him where to look. They wanted him to be more than just their sword—they wanted him to be their judgment.

His faith didn't break under the silence. Instead, it crystallized into something harder, sharper, more dangerous. Each unanswered prayer became proof of their trust in him. Each moment of silence confirmed that this was his trial to face alone.

"I see now," he continued, his voice taking on an edge of zealous certainty. "Kael thinks he can turn us against each other. He thinks his agents can hide among us, protected by our own doubts and fears." His eyes blazed with inner fire. "But I will prove myself worthy of your trust. I will burn away all uncertainty. I will find those who betray you, and I will purge them with such thoroughness that none will dare question your divine will again."

Orin rose slowly, his armor creaking in the stillness. Where before he had sought guidance, now he saw purpose. Where he had begged for signs, now he saw opportunity. The gods' silence wasn't a punishment—it was permission. Permission to act as their instrument of judgment, unfettered by mortal concerns of mercy or restraint.

"Very well. I will not fail you."

The change in him was immediate and terrifying. The next morning, he emerged from the sacred chamber transformed. Gone was the disciplined commander who led by example. In his place stood something far more dangerous—a zealot unleashed, convinced that every brutal action was divine will made manifest.

His training sessions became exhibitions of cruelty. Soldiers who showed the slightest hesitation found themselves brutally punished. Those who questioned his methods were quietly removed from their positions. He drove his warriors toward fanaticism, demanding absolute devotion to their cause.

"If you cannot endure this," he would say as another soldier fell beneath his divine-enhanced blows, "you cannot endure Kael."

But his most disturbing change was in how he hunted the "traitor." He began keeping detailed records of every soldier's movements, demanding reports of private conversations, implementing harsh interrogations for the slightest suspicion. He no longer sought proof—he sought a scapegoat.

From their hidden vantage points, Lysara and Elaris watched his descent with growing concern.

"He's going to get someone killed," Elaris muttered one evening as they observed Orin interrogating a supply officer. "He doesn't care about truth anymore."

"No," Lysara agreed quietly. "He cares about validation. The gods' silence has broken something in him."

Dain noticed too. The Last Knight had fought alongside Orin for years, but now he saw something in his fellow warrior that chilled him to his core. He finally confronted him in the training yard, after watching Orin nearly kill a young recruit for dropping his guard.

"You're losing control, Orin."

Orin's eyes burned with terrifying conviction. "No. I am doing what must be done."

Dain stepped closer, keeping his voice low. "You're hurting your own men."

"The weak will not survive against Kael." Orin didn't flinch. "If they cannot endure this, they cannot endure him."

Dain studied him carefully, seeing the madness that had taken root behind the divine fire in his eyes. In that moment, he made a quiet decision—Orin had become dangerous. He was no longer thinking clearly, no longer serving the gods' will but his own twisted interpretation of it.

But Dain could not move against him. Not yet. Without proof, any action would split their forces, creating exactly the weakness their enemies sought to exploit. So he watched, and he waited, knowing that sooner or later, Orin's madness would provide the evidence he needed.

In their private chamber that night, Lysara and Elaris discussed the growing tension between the two commanders.

"Dain will move against him eventually," Elaris noted, a slight smirk playing at his lips. "Orin's giving him no choice."

"Yes," Lysara agreed, her mind already working through the possibilities. "And when he does, we'll be perfectly positioned to take advantage of it."

Above them all, in their eternal realm, the gods remained silent. Perhaps they watched as their champion's faith twisted into something even they had not intended. Perhaps they saw how their silence was accomplishing what Kael's power could not—the slow, steady unraveling of their own forces.

Or perhaps they simply waited, knowing that faith without guidance was like a sword without a wielder—dangerous to friend and foe alike.


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