Chapter 37
There is actually something in common between creating light novels and writing online novels, that is serialization.
It’s just that the intervals between serialization of light novels are longer, while online novels are much shorter.
But no matter which form it is, there is a big problem, that is, it is difficult to modify the chapters that have been sent out.
Even a great man like Jin Yong has to think over and over again and be cautious about the modifications, let alone ordinary people like them.
Therefore, for Kasumigaoka Utaha, the biggest problem now is how to ensure the continuity of the plot without being abrupt and make the plot fuller when the first volume has been released.
Of course, the purpose of the plot is to bring out the image of the characters.
Kasumigaoka Utaha’s ultimate goal is to make the character of Sayaka deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.
She, who lacks friends, always thinks that if Sayaka can be recognized by others, can she also be recognized by others?
“Kasugano-kun, these are the problems. I can’t change the male lead now. What do you think I should do?��…”Kasumigaoka Utaha sat dejectedly on the chair, hugging her knees.
This action made Kasugano Toru look away.
Senior sister, you are exposed…
Because she was at home, Kasumigaoka Utaha did not wear the common black tights, but chose ordinary home clothes. Today’s shorts were not too long, and her two plump thighs were exposed to the air. This action at this moment made the originally seductive girl feel more pitiful, which made people feel distressed.
“Senior sister, don’t worry, there are many ways.”Seeing the appearance of Kasumigaoka Utaha, Kasugano Toru felt a little bit sorry.
After all, this was related to his meal ticket. For the sake of money, he simply stopped pretending.
“Actually, the first volume of Senpai is really well written, and the character of Sayuka is also very well described. I have expressed my admiration for her before.”
“And if the senior wants to enrich the characters and the storyline, why not start with the male protagonist?”
If there is a picture, the area around Kasumigaoka Utaha’s head should be pitch black, and then a flash of lightning will appear, bringing a bright light.
“Yes, there is also the character of Naoto!”The girl woke up from her dream.
Such an action made Kasugano Toru speechless.
Please, senior sister, even if Sayuka is your incarnation, you can’t let the male protagonist’s presence be so low, right?
And it is precisely because of Kasumigaoka Utaha’s operation that this book has a very inconsistent place.
“Senior, don’t you think that judging from the situation in the first volume, Naoto is actually not worthy of Sayuka?”
Kasugano Toru said it all.
There are so many touching love stories in history, but almost all of them have one thing in common, that is, the hero and heroine must work together.
If one party gives in, it will definitely become a tragedy.
But it is precisely because two people work together and get better together that the hard-earned love is particularly cherished, and it also makes countless readers sigh.
But in the novel”Love Metronome”?
It is because of Kasumigaoka Utaha’s excellent writing that Sayuka was shaped into a nearly perfect girl.
The reason why it is said to be nearly perfect is that she also has many common problems of girls, such as sensitivity, such as willfulness.
But in the writing of Kasumigaoka Utaha, these minor problems not only did not damage Sayuka’s image, but made readers feel that such a girl is more real and more lovely. Do you really think there are any perfect girls in life?
The reason why people have conflicts is actually because 100% of people are different, but 99% of people cannot accept this difference.
But in the novel, the girl’s minor problems make her Returning from the high sky to the mortal world, readers can feel that Sayuka is the girl who lives around us.
This sense of closeness is the reason why the first volume of”Love Metronome” was a great success.
But in comparison, what kind of image is Naoto?
A typical light novel male protagonist, except for being assassy, he can’t even find a single advantage.
Even if he is a little straight, a little dull, or has a low EQ, as long as readers can see that Naoto is working hard for their relationship and trying hard to make himself improve, they can accept this character taking away his”wife”. But what does”Love Metronome” look like now?
Kasugano Toru always feels that Kasumigaoka Utaha is telling others that you don’t need to work hard or be excellent. As long as you are a gentle, cautious, and useless boy, there will be a perfect girl like Sayuka to pursue you. What a fart!
How could such a good thing happen in real life?
What’s more, if the second volume is really written according to the outline set by Kasumigaoka Utaha, perhaps the male protagonist will have to have another label.
PUA
He wandered between the two girls, took advantage of their feelings for him, and wantonly played with two excellent girls. If this wasn’t PUA, what was it?
Thinking of this, Kasugano Toru wanted to rush into the book”Love Metronome” and beat up this good-for-nothing guy.
“So, senior sister, please quickly flesh out the image of the male protagonist.”
“Love is always a two-way journey. If only one person is desperately trying to get to the other person, this relationship will never last.”
At this moment, Kasugano Toru looked like a chicken soup master.
But no matter what, in his heart, love is like this.
Don’t always say that men are too tired or women are too tired.
The truth is, everyone is tired!
Even if you are a full-time wife, do you think housework is something easy to do? It’s just three simple words, and they often need to spend a whole day to have a clean and tidy environment when you get home from work.
The same goes for men. Do you really think that the salary you bring home every month is something easy to earn? Now Kasugano Toru has already had a deep understanding.
So if you want a long-lasting love, it is always a matter of two people. It’s just a piece of cake.���What’s the point of dating if it’s more tiring for men or women?
Wouldn’t it be better to go to a debate competition?
After listening to Kasugano Toru’s chicken soup, Kasumigaoka Utaha’s expression became very strange
“Kasugano-kun, you are actually a sea king, right?”
To be fair, if you haven’t been in eight or ten relationships, how could you possibly feel this way?
Kasugano Toru, your reputation has been damaged.