Some reflections and conclusions given in response to the suggestions made by readers
One: reflection.
When reading, many readers are not only eager to help catch bugs, but also put forward some suggestions.
For example, the separation symbol / for buildings and potions.
For example, according to my writing method——
Lesser Healing Elixir has a cooldown of 60/second.
My initial intention was to take / as a symbol for dividing units.
However, some book friends later pointed out that this is actually wrong, and it is completely different from what I expressed.
I just realized that after staying up all night today and waking up in the afternoon, while I had time, I sorted out the previous chapters and corrected all these points.
Of course, due to the modification of the original chapter version, some of the chapters and paragraphs will be automatically deleted by the system, please forgive me.
Thank you for your great help, this book can only get better and better.
Two: The disadvantages of digital novels.
Readers who have read the rules of addition and the testimonials on the shelf should know that I am an old author opening a new vest.
Xiaoyu used to be good at entertainment, and his hand speed was not bad, about 4,000 words per hour.
But with a different theme and a different track, this is the first time I have come into contact with the type of data-based novels. It is very difficult to write, and my hand speed has dropped to about 2,000.
In the novel, some equipment, accessories, weapons, and potions all need to search for information in real time and also need to be set up.
Xiaoyu spent even more time than serious codewords in searching for information and resetting certain items.
Just like yesterday's royal delicacy.
The original game setting is to summon an ornamental pet (follows the protagonist, has no blood volume, no attack, can't be killed, and can't provide any help).
But does this fit in the novel?
This kind of setting does not conform to the underlying logic I constructed for the novel!
So in the point of royal delicacy, I thought about a few ideas.
The first idea: Turn the ornamental pets summoned by Royal Delicious into battle pets?
But in Terra's world view, giving pets life points can guarantee that they will not die when facing mobs, but how can they guarantee that pets will not die when facing bosses?
If the pet dies, is it necessary to set the function of this pet?
The second idea is to integrate it into the slime staff to strengthen the slime staff.
But this can be done for the protagonist, what if other people don't have a staff? The resources dropped by the boss are not suitable for all personnel, but only for a single individual, so the applicability of the royal delicacy is invalid.
After thinking about it, I ruled it out.
The third idea: increase the upper limit of the summoning bar.
After self-vetoing the first two settings, I finally decided to set Royal Delicious 2 as the upper limit of summoning.
This setting has applicability and has the effect of improving combat. It is suitable for the general public and will not affect other original logic.
And this point in the novel, only about a hundred words, made me think about it for two hours.
In addition, in today's chapter update, a large number of second designs have been carried out, which are reflected in the remarks column of accessories.
I drew the Alliance Battle, I wrote the Machinists' Guild, and I focused on Zack the Mechanic.
Some readers may wonder why these are introduced in the notes, but in fact these are foreshadowing, that is, digging holes that readers often say, burying future plot lines.
In the last era, the protagonist is currently out of contact, and readers don't understand.
Sometimes it can only be described through these details to gradually reveal the events of the last era.
There is also the most important scarlet inheritance party.
Not only should the scarlet inheritance be taller, but it can’t destroy the original logic. After all, I just want him to be invincible, not directly invincible. The role of various inheritance authority and scarlet authority should be compared with the ninja inheritance written before.
Why do you want to write Ninja Legacy? The meaning is here. Without comparison, there is no standard of measurement, and everyone will not know how strong he is.
This is one of the meanings of writing ninja inheritance (of course there are other functions).
To be honest... this chapter has 4,000 words, and I wrote it until six o'clock this morning.
But I have to admit that even if I do this, there will still be shortcomings. After all, it is the first time I dabble.
After waking up this afternoon and seeing some reader feedback.
I found a few friends to talk to.
I've been in this circle for a long time, and I know a lot of people. I've made reservations, and I've chatted with them when I'm free or not.
I told them about a current problem with this book——
Does the harvest of data novels need to be described in detail?
Finally, just now, I finally chatted with a friend and came up with an idea-the details are appropriate!
That's right, don't just look at these four words, it is actually very helpful to the construction of the trend of the novel and the underlying logic of the novel.
I have been busy for several hours, including the modification of the whole book about /, and some omissions. You can re-download and the latest version will appear.
In a few days, I will set up a single chapter related to the work to list all the current protagonist's shelter and the protagonist's personal complete panel information.
As for the novel, the complete information panel was written to prevent some readers from forgetting the strength of the protagonist after reading it, and only the corresponding part will be released later.
There is also the most important revision of writing ideas, that is——
The process of making consumable materials will be discussed in one stroke in the future, and I will try to write briefly.
Of course, my background will have real-time statistics for each chapter, but in the main article section of the release, I hide this process and write as much content as possible to ensure that there is no water.
To be honest, when it comes to the subject matter we love, no author wants to be fooled.
Otherwise... I wouldn't stay up all night and write only 8,000 words.
As long as there is an item that has been described in detail once, I rarely continue to write it for the second time, right?
However, since the readers have raised questions, it is necessary to actively correct them.
Third: Both orders plus updates.
The score of this book is currently 700 average subscriptions, starting from 500 average subscriptions, every 100 average subscriptions will be increased, and a chapter will be added. There are currently 2 chapters in total.
For every 100 chapters of the monthly pass, one more chapter is added, and now it has reached 300. The previous statistics were 200, and one more chapter is added to the monthly pass.
The total progress bar is [6/37].
Please rest assured readers, although there is a gap between the results and the expected results.
But this is Terra! This is a Terra novel!
Searching the entire website, not to mention finding better Terra novels than mine, even finding a few Terra novels is not easy, is it? If I can achieve this result, I should burn high incense!
So rest assured, although my friends have many boutiques, big boutiques, and ten thousand orders. But I won't be too ambitious. This novel will definitely be written well.
If you have an opinion, everyone can raise it.
correct!
Some readers also asked about the readership.
But... I'm not sure how many people are going to be in the group.
Why don't you tell me first, if there are a lot of people who want to join the group, I will create a group, and when the time comes, bring me online to play Calamity and Terra.
Of course... this is not fishing, how can the author's affairs be called fishing.
This is called going out to collect materials!
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