Tales of The Primordial Dawn

Chapter 41: Thoughts Alone



Alright I lied, did some searches on indigenous xxxx. Radish/Tomatoes/Goats are not native. I might go back and edit them to different things, not sure yet. Anyways, going forward I'll only use native fruits/vegetables/animals unless they cross over into different lands and find/trade them or something.

The world was wrapped in silence, the kind that was only possible during the very early hours of the morning. I sat on the bank of the river, absentmindedly running my fingers along the edge of the copper knife I held. Its cool, metallic touch was familiar and comforting, an emblem of the progress my tribe had made.

I stared out at the river, its surface still and dark in the pre-dawn light. My thoughts drifted to Silma and her tribespeople. They had left us, armed with the knowledge of our methods and innovations, journeying back to their own tribe. I hoped, sincerely, that their journey would be safe and that the knowledge we imparted would be of help to them.

Silma... she was young, not unlike me, but she carried the weight of her tribe on her shoulders, the mantle of Chieftess. A title that seemed to not hold any true authority in her tribe. Her tribe was large, much larger than ours. A pang of envy hit me at the thought, but it was quickly replaced by a sense of hope. If they could adopt some of our ways, it could benefit them greatly.

I sighed, laying back against the cool grass and gazing up at the sky. The stars were still visible, flickering brightly against the canvas of the night. We needed to grow, both in numbers and resources. As I had told Silma, a tribe's population should grow with its resources. We needed to find more grains, other than corn, something like barley or rice. It would diversify our food sources, allow us to produce flour, and potentially bread.

Spices and cotton were on the list too, their potentials vast in expanding our horizons. But for now, I could settle for a new grain and a few fruit varieties. The challenge would be expanding our fields; we would need more people, more hands to work them.

With these thoughts running in my mind, I rose, picking up a lump of clay I had brought along. Sitting by the river, I began to knead and mold the clay, water from the river helping shape it. Gradually, a plaque began to form under my skilled hands.

The clay plaque had taken form, a blank canvas for my thoughts and dreams. It was time to give them shape, a form more tangible than fleeting thoughts.

My copper knife in hand, I began to carve words into the soft clay, each stroke a representation of my dreams for my tribe. I had many goals, some immediate, some for the distant future, but it felt right to lay them all out, to give them form, to make them real.

First, our infrastructure - we needed to build granaries, separate from the elder's hut, dedicated places to store our food. It would be efficient, logical. Then, storage buildings, not just for food but for our resources. It would allow us easy access and better organization.

Workshops were next. A place for the craftsmen and women of our tribe to work undisturbed, sheltered from the vagaries of the weather. Their skills were valuable, and they deserved a dedicated space.

Education was a priority too. A school, to teach our young ones math, writing, reading. The knowledge would empower them, shape them into the future leaders of our tribe.

For my mother, a new healing hut. One with shelves to keep her herbs and remedies, multiple beds for her patients. She deserved better, and this was the least I could do for her.

Religion, the veneration of our ancestors, held an important place in our hearts. A dedicated building for worship would serve as a gathering place, a center of spiritual strength for our tribe.

Lastly, the defensive wall. The thought had been on my mind for a long time. It would protect us, offer us safety from external threats.

As the first light of dawn painted the sky in hues of pastel, I turned my attention to a new piece of clay. This time, I intended to pour my grandest idea yet onto its surface.

From the depths of my imagination, a dream I had long harbored started to take shape. I envisioned a waterwheel, not just one but several, that could harness the river's energy to bring us water more efficiently. It was a daunting task, yet an exhilarating one. I etched this into the plaque, the words seeming to come alive under my fingertips.

I pondered on how the collected water would be stored, considering a reservoir but quickly dismissing it in favor of a tank. This would be more contained, more practical. The idea of attaching clay pipes to it surfaced in my mind, and with the flick of my wrist, it found its place on the plaque.

The pipes would not be like those I had known in my past life, but they would serve our needs nonetheless. They could aid in watering our fields, in sending water to distant parts of our village. I even envisioned them being used in large public baths.

As I etched these thoughts onto the clay, an even more ambitious idea struck me. What if these pipes could be part of a plumbing system for toilets? The notion seemed almost audacious, yet I couldn't help but see its potential.

I hastily added to the plaque, outlining a system where drainage pipes could be placed underneath the toilets. These would lead downstream, safely away from our settlement. A constant flow of water from the main pipe could flush away the waste, creating a simple yet effective sanitation system.

As I put the finishing touches on the plaque, I couldn't help but marvel at the idea. To me, it was a testament to the ingenuity of human thought.

Each grand idea was a spark of potential, a vision for the future of my tribe. I was overcome with a deep sense of longing, a fervent desire to bring these plans to fruition, to transform my tribe into a beacon of advancement, a city unlike any in this time.

I knew all too well that such an endeavor would require meticulous planning, careful execution, and a considerable amount of time. It was a game of patience and strategy. With a resolute expression, I picked up another piece of clay, ready to outline my immediate goals.

The construction of a granary and storage buildings was paramount. Ensuring the food security of my tribe and establishing an efficient resource management system were the first stepping stones towards realizing my grand vision.

My thoughts then veered towards waste management. A designated area for waste collection was a simple yet essential necessity, one that could be relatively easily accomplished with the resources we had at hand. It was something that could help maintain the cleanliness and health of the tribe, providing us with the foundation to strive for greater feats.

While my hands worked deftly over the clay, my mind wandered over the potential resources yet to be discovered - fruits, grains, cotton, nuts, copper, and if luck favored us, iron and tin. Even as the list grew, I realized the need for something more concrete - a map.

A detailed, visual representation of our surroundings would immensely benefit the tribe. It would allow us to pinpoint resources, identify hunting grounds and navigate with ease. For a map, we would need a different medium - animal skin, maybe, and crushed berries for ink.

Yet, as I contemplated the idea, a twinge of regret settled within me. I wished for something more, something akin to the paper from my past life. But as I tried to recall how it was made, I drew a blank. I had a vague understanding of how medieval cultures used animal skin, but the exact process eluded me.

As I gazed upon the homes of my tribe, I couldn't help but imagine their transformation. Ten homes in a block, separated by spacious paths that could be lined with dirt, stones, bricks, or even concrete if we could manage it. With the living spaces on one side, we could dedicate the other for our workshops and storage areas. I visualized the center of our tribe, an open space punctuated by two large public baths. The thought brought a warm smile to my face.

A sketch would be ideal, I reasoned, but I decided to push the idea aside for the moment. My thoughts were a cascade of plans and visions, and what I needed now was to get them down before they faded. With that in mind, I took a deep breath and headed downstream to gather more clay.

I started to envision plaques dedicated to the alphabet and numbers. Teaching the children was a priority, and these basic tools of knowledge would be invaluable. As I walked, I found my thoughts wandering again, this time to the concept of a schedule.

The idea of working from five in the morning to nine at night was a Ludacris, but a thought I had in mind. I chuckled to myself, imagining the surprised looks on their faces at the suggestion. They would want some form of compensation, something to motivate them to adapt to such a regimented routine. Still, no one should have to work that many hours, it had to be more reasonable.

The tribe's understanding of time was still rudimentary, measured by the shadow of a stick on a clay sundial I had created. If we were to move towards a more organized schedule, we would need a better way to track time, a way that could convert the sun's movements into numerical values.

The idea seemed daunting but feasible. The concept of ticks on the sundial could, in theory, be converted into numbers, making it easier for everyone to keep track of time. I knew it was a huge leap, but then again, so were many of my plans.

Announcement
This is new, as it was brought up that his plans should be explained to you, the reader. So I inserted this chapter between the others. I tried to voice most of his thoughts, but not all of them. A few more chapters to go before the end of this book/volume. Next one will be extended as I try to focus more on developing the characters, their relationships, conflicts, and births. While also trying to have Tak struggle more with having the tribe accept some of his newer ideas/plans as many don't seem to have a real purpose in the eyes of some. With the tribe learning to adapt to these changes, developing or showing more of their rituals/culture.

Spoiler

By my, I mean the AI and my edits. According to RR, AI-Assisted Content = The author has used an AI tool for editing or proofreading. The story thus reflects the author's creativity and structure, but it may use the AI's voice and tone. There may be some negligible amount of snippets generated by AI. AI-Generated Content = The story was generated using an AI tool; the author prompted and directed the process, and edited the result. The latter is what I am doing.


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