My Cartoonist Guide

Chapter 1181 Reviews

Xi Muhan and Wang Wenhong did not laugh, and Shen Xin was not angry either. They pushed the pastry in front of Wu Xiaoli and Ji Yue, and opened “ComicFuture” by themselves.

“Xian Yuan”, as the name suggests, is a comic book of Xian Xia.

Shen Xin has read some fairy-xia novels, and not many comics in the fairy-xia category.

The opening chapter of this comic uses the common crossing, and the whole person travels to the world of Xianxia. In order to speed up the pace, it does not tell how the person travels in the first time, but at the beginning of the story, the protagonist is in this world. After living for two months, I told about the past in an intermittent way.

In fact, the type of traversal is common in comics and novels. How to describe the traversal has its own methods. Some start with what happened and how to traverse, and some omit this step.

The late-reading painter is not too good, nor is it the kind of lack of structure, on the contrary, the use of the lens is quite reasonable.

After the traversal, the protagonist uses the knowledge before the traversal to make a living by relying on “calculation.” But the protagonist’s approach is not always effective. Once, he was caught by a Taoist priest, saying that he slandered Taoism and dragged him to a Taoist temple. With the idea of ​​not starving to death, the protagonist begs the Taoist priest to let him start the Tao…

In addition to the slightly more routines of the bridges that crossed, Shen Xin was surprised by other aspects, whether it was the protagonist’s failure to pretend to be X, being caught by a Taoist priest, or the protagonist taking the initiative to become a Taoist priest for his livelihood.

However, after the protagonist became a Taoist priest, the plot seemed too stable, introducing the gymnasium and preaching with other Taoist priests. After about three or four episodes, until a monster appeared in the nearby mountains and forests, the story became tense again…

Later, the protagonist was captured by the monster and witnessed the little Taoist who was captured with him being eaten by the monster.

Of course, the protagonist was caught… well…

In fact, there are not many in the comics, because the protagonist is usually beaten to death if he can’t beat, or can’t get rid of it. There are also more famous protagonists who have been caught, such as Xiaojie of “Full-time Hunter”, who is phantom The brigade was caught.

This also shows that most authors can’t control this kind of routine-many readers don’t like to see the protagonist being caught.

Even in “Full-time Hunter”, before Xiaojie and Qi Ya were arrested, Fu Jian Yibo used a lot of pen and ink to portray the Phantom Brigade. Even during the Kurabika exam, some people pretended to be the Phantom Brigade. group. After these preparations, Xiaojie was arrested, and the readers could also accept it.

However, the plot in “Fairy Fate” is a bit straightforward. Under the premise that the Taoist reminded him, he was still caught, and it was somewhat inappropriate.

The last two words are also the best grades, and they are also the place where there are more scoldings. It is because the protagonist meets the soul of a little girl to help him escape the predicament, but is possessed by the little girl and loses consciousness.

“Worry!”

Shen Xin can guess the reader’s evaluation without having to read it.

There are highlights in this comic, but the shortcomings are more obvious. It can even be said that the shortcomings far outweigh the advantages. Otherwise, “Fairy Fate” would not be the current result.

“Old… teacher… how is it?” Ji Yue was a little nervous.

“Uh…” Shen Xin was silent for a moment, “Xianxia comics… are rarely seen on “ComicFuture”. Of course, I am not saying that such comics are not good. In fact, its appearance is given to “ComicFuture”. A kind of fresh blood. I liked the first episode, especially, the protagonist was pierced by a Taoist priest because of his lack of knowledge, and looked very sensible. But the latter is not so amazing, the plot is too flat, and a few words were wasted. Length. If I were a reader, I had no idea what the purpose of reading this comic was.”

Chi Yue’s face instantly paled.

“Don’t be nervous, you know what I want to say?” Shen Xin smiled.

Late reading shook his head.

“Normal people encounter this situation, it is this kind of reflection, most of the Xianxia world also has daily life, this is what you want to express, right?”

Reading late nodded, “That’s right.”

“But you have to be clear, what readers want to see, they are not to see how real the protagonist is-no matter how true you write, it is also the person on paper, can it be true to the reader himself? Impossible? So, what the reader wants to see It’s the difference between the protagonist. Even if he is a fellow cultivator, the protagonist must have his own unique place. Therefore, the subsequent adventure is very important, that is, the protagonist is caught… Actually, there are some shortcomings in this plot, but fortunately there is After the change, I finally lose consciousness, making the reader feel that the protagonist is too wasteful.”

“I did this for a reason. That little girl will stay in the protagonist’s body…”

“Then this body belongs to the protagonist, or is it a little girl? The little girl is lodged in the male subject. Isn’t the little girl going to see the male lead eating and drinking in the future?”

“No… I didn’t plan to do this?” Chi Yue waved his hand quickly.

“Then what are you going to do with it?”

“…” The late reading was speechless, “Teacher… the readers scolded a lot of these two words.”

“Don’t worry about it. What really determines the success or failure of a comic is the grade. Besides, there are more readers who didn’t scold you. Right?”

“Then…Teacher, how do I change it?” Chiyue Liushen Wuzhu.

There is certainly a way to change… but Shen Xin doesn’t plan to say.

“You have the editor in charge. How to discuss the plot with you is her business. If I say too much, it will be on my behalf. Moreover, Xiaoli has been an editor for more than ten years This problem still cannot help her. By the way, I heard that you are a cartoonist from a foreign industry?”

“Isn’t it? I studied history at university. I studied fine art for more than a year when I was in school. After graduation, I studied by myself for more than a year. Later I worked as an assistant with Teacher Wang Yunze until the work was accepted. I quit my job as an assistant.” Yan Yue was a little embarrassed, “So, the painter is really not solid.”

“Ms. Wang…” Shen Xin nodded, “Your painter doesn’t panic. If you paint for a long time, your level will rise.”

This sentence, Shen Xin did not lie.

The original one of “One Punch Man”, although the painting has been criticized by many people, the painter has also improved. In the second half of “Persistence 100%”, the painter obviously got better.

Also, the author of “Giant” Jian Shanchuang, “Giant” began to serialize, his painting skills are not good, but later, his painting skills have also improved a lot.

Of course, compared with those cartoonists with solid basic skills, their drawing skills are still not good enough, but after all, they are much better.

Therefore, it is not that the cartoonist doesn’t care about the painterly, but is slightly behind the plot and storyboard drafts.

It may be because of Wang Yunze’s assistant, or other reasons. The storytelling of the late reading painting is okay. Although the plot is a bit slow, the price is stable, but the pressure of grades does not allow him to proceed step by step. Fortunately, Wu Xiaoli I also saw it, obviously speeding up, as long as the subsequent plot does not collapse, the results should improve.

This type of comics, as the protagonist grows, the results will definitely get better, there is no doubt about this.